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Rinako Eris

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Rinako Eris

Post by Paige weaver on Mon Dec 15, 2014 11:40 pm

CHARACTER

Name:  Rinako Eris prefers Rin

Age: 17

Gender:  female

Species:  ant faunas (Has the antennas)

Call Sign/Symbol:  None

Occupation(s)/Student Year (If a student):  First year student

Appearance: (Face claim: http://i.imgur.com/Gkbl3TX.jpg )
Rin is ruffly 5' 3" and slouches when she Stands or walks.
Combat out fit is the same as her normal out fit but the knee guards and elbow guards.

History: Rin was Born in the town of lumiere. From a very young age Rin was  a tom boy often playing in the dirt and with boys having no friends that where girls for the longest time. At 3 her mother and father left her to take care of her one year old sister. There grandparents took them in for most of Rin's life in tell she left to go to school and signal then to beacon taking her sister with her when she did to better take care of her.

Personality: Rin is a very boyish girl often acting more like a guy then a girl and dressing as such. She is the first to beat up on her self if she fails at something and also the first to call some one out on there mistaking her for a he. Rin also dislikes sweet things to the point of not eating anything like cake or candy with out spiting it out.

Strengths:
-Fast
-Smart
-good at hiding
-good knowledge of dust and guns

Weaknesses:
-no close up attacks
-mean to herself a lot
-had a hard time making friends
-low aura
-no long range attacks

Semblance:Call of the wild
Once a day Rin can use her semblance to call near by animals with in a mile radius to her aid. The animals will attack any hostile things in the area then quickly leave. When the animals arrive they start there attack quickly as possible leaving as soon as it is done. After use Rin has to rest for a hour before she can fight again..

WEAPON

Name: Discords song

First Form: http://www.carabinasypistolas.com/imagenes/articulos/med/smith___wesson_r8_revolver_1866.jpg Discords song is a revolver that has 8 round mag that can be loaded with dust based rounds or regular rounds the caliber of the rounds is 44. Rin keeps about 80 rounds on her
8 fire
8 shock
8 ice
8 earth
8 wind
8 kinetic
8 water
16 regular
8 foam rounds for none lethal attacks
 

History: Made by Rin when she got into Beacon.


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Re: Rinako Eris

Post by Drae on Tue Dec 16, 2014 6:17 pm

First off, fix the coding. Having everything underlined and bolded is just as bad as having no coding at all. Expand on the history, and explain what her weapon does. State the amount of time that the animals will attack her targets. I'd like a bit more for the appearance, but as of this moment I can't tell what I'd like more of. (I'm not gonna go into the spelling or grammar despite how much my OCD will hate me).

That's all I see right now.

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Post by Drae on Wed Dec 17, 2014 9:09 pm

Looks good right now. Although while it isn't required, more information in the History section would be appreciated. I'll leave that to you as to if you want to add that in or not.

Other than that: Approved

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