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Ailin Briar

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Ailin Briar

Post by Empoleon_Blownaparte on Tue Mar 17, 2015 6:27 am

CHARACTER

Name: Ailin Briar (Ail for short, he insists his few real friends be on a last name basis with him)

Age: 19

Gender: Male

Species: Fruit Bat Faunus

Call Sign/Symbol: A grey katana  with a black demon wing unfurling from it's left side and a white angel wing furling up inwards on it's right.

Occupation(s)/Student Year (If a student): Heir of and worker at the Briar Patch Bar chain. First year at Beacon.

Appearance: (http://www.zerochan.net/828678#full - Yu Narukami/Souji Seta/Protagonist/Bro-swagonist - Persona 4) 6'3 in height, 170 in weight. Short, tidy grey hair parted by two equally-grey fruit bat ears. Yellow eyes that turn grey when he uses his semblance. He wears a rather casual black, grey and white outfit pictured in the face claim. In battle he wears chainmail under his outfit, which is the same as his casual wear.

History:Born and raised and only child in the city of Lumiere by the middle son of three of a famous old-money family that had been in Lumiere since it was founded. Ailin's father raised his son to be the most powerful man in Remnant, something his family has been trying and failing to breed since Lumiere's founding, due to his father insistence at being the best at everything, Ailin gained a sort of complex to be the best no matter what... One day when he was 7, however, he started to get really interested in swords.... Really, really interested in swords, often rquesting his father to let him go to a swordsmanship lesson done by the town's local wiseman, Angelo Cinis, and to buy him his own sword, it was a rare occurance for him to be interested in something his father didn't force him into. Eventually his father let him go to the lessons and told him he could have a sword of his own on his twelfth birthday if he got good enough at it. Needless to say, he was a natural. Years passed and Ailin's life moved on as he tried to fulfill his father's wishes to the best he could at everything, but never losing his love of swordsmanship. Along the way he learnt many skills of varying usefulness, such as woodcarving and blind archery. It wasn't until he was 18 that he was forced to move to the City of Vale, for his father's bar, the Briar Patch, which he founded himself to set himself apart from his brothers, who were a noble huntsman and a worthless lay-about mooching off of his brothers respectively, right before the move he overheard his father talking to the caravan they were travelling with until a city with an airship dock, they spoke of many landmarks in the city, the words that stood out to him the most for some reason were "Beacon Academy", he had heard of this place from around the bar and thought it was just a small place from a nearby city worth mentioning for some reason, when he asked his father about it just as they were leaving, he was pretty much told "Oh... I never told you about Beacon?.... You should go to Beacon, your uncle went there and he's one of the best hunters in Remnant!", sadly, by the time they got to the city, the year's graduation day was nearing and it was too late for new applicants, so he went the next year, needless to say he passed the test with flying colours.

Personality: Cold, quiet and on occasion cruel, Ail comes off as someone who feels nothing. Being very selfish, pragmatic and sociopathic, Ail just doesn't realize that other people can feel offended by his actions or the action of others. Due to his seeming lack of emotions, Al often thinks very objectively, but his version of objective is... Interesting.... His goals can be strange (I.E. Be the best at literally everything, even things that he'd not be good at otherwise, from the useful like swordsmanship, to the useless, but brag-worthy like blindfolded archery contests, to the pointless, if not humorous like crossdressing pageants, to the outright odd like woodcarving with only his teeth...), or at least have strange reasoning (I.E. He'd assault an intruder to his home, not because he's a threat and possibly a thief, but because he's walking on the carpet with his filthy, dirt covered shoes....). Despite his odd, often sociopathic and near-emotionless behaviour, he really does have a heart, despite being seemingly uncaring to what few friends he has, he'd in reality do anything for them if it didn't go against his own goal, if he was in love with a girl, he'd trip over his words and have an unusually awkward air around him if he even laid eyes on her... Heteromantic and asexual.

Strengths: Very persistent. His reasoning can be kind of helpful at times. Mostly fearless. Has a large amount of useless talents. Can shoot a bow and arrow blindfolded (But he can only hit unmoving targets... And he HAS to have the blindfold, he's worthless without it...) A master at swordsmanship (But has a really basic style and special strengths to it, he just hits things and does it really well)

Weaknesses: Can be kind of an oddball. Often rather rude. Often feels empty inside. Can hate someone for the strangest, most minor things. Has very minor homophobia (If he found a friend he didn't know was gay was gay, he wouldn't care, but if a foe of his was gay, he'd use it as an excuse to hate them slightly more) Has an obsession with being the best at everything, if anyone beats him at anything, no matter how small or luck-based (Rock-Paper-Sisscors for example) he will have a meltdown.... Due to his simple style, he can be very easy to fight for someone who knows their stuff about swords. Often under- or overestimates his foes when he doesn't know exactly how good or bad they are, 'causing him to be too cocky or too cautious.

Semblance: Wings of Balance: When used, two grey wings made of aura come from Ailin's back, an angelic one on his right and a demonic one on his left, these wings not only allow him to glide for a while, but also have differing effects on anyone they touch.
-Demon wing: When he touches someone with his demonic wing, they suddenly feel a pain that can range from a slight sting in their toes to an agonising pain in their entire body, the pain felt depends on Ailin's personal feelings of the person, if he accidentally touches a friend of his with it, it'd be rather minor, if he really dislikes the person, they'd feel a much greater pain. Depending on the amount felt, the effect can last from 30 seconds for a more agonizing pain, to half an hour for a rather minor annoyance.
-Angel wing: When he touches someone with his angel wing, whatever emotions they feel beforehand will be replaced by a short, but powerful sense of bliss. This can be used to calm down an enraged ally, distract a troublesome foe or to distract an injured person from their wounds. Much like his Demon wing's ability, it's duration is effected by how he feels about the person affected, if it's a foe he's only met recently and already has a distaste for, it'll only last 30 seconds, if it's an old friend or trusted ally, it'll last around 30 minutes. Unlike the Demon wing's effect, the power of the Angel wing does not varry.
The different wings will cancel eachother out and replace eachother's effects. The wings last about 25 minutes and Ailin must wait another hour to use them again. His eyes turn grey when he uses it.

WEAPON

Name: Banfer

First Form: A katana made of silver, there's nothing really special about it, but it's one of Ailin's most prized possesions.

Second Form: N/A

Third Form: N/A

History: Bought by his father for him when he was 12, it was too heavy for him back then, but he's since grown into it.


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Re: Ailin Briar

Post by Paige weaver on Tue Mar 17, 2015 2:07 pm

first off I want a combat weakness and secondly the semblance is ok but the healing effect I don't like ether make it damage based or healing based not both.
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Re: Ailin Briar

Post by Empoleon_Blownaparte on Wed Mar 18, 2015 7:20 am

Fixed I think, I made his semblance focused on same-but-different effects, will that be enough?
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Post by Paige weaver on Wed Mar 18, 2015 3:17 pm

one last thing i want a longer cool down on the wings
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Post by Empoleon_Blownaparte on Wed Mar 18, 2015 4:59 pm

done
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Post by Paige weaver on Wed Mar 18, 2015 6:00 pm

approved you can move it yourself
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